Wednesday, November 30, 2011

draft 2

     Hi I assume that you're here to read why the cold weather is bad. The first paragraph is about freezing. The second is about the getting a cold. The third paragraph is about the water. If you want to learn about it read on.
     
     As you know the first reason cold is bad is about freezing. If you don't have a sweater or any other thing to keep you warm in a cold spot it will be likely that you will die from the cold. If you go into really cold water about 15 degrees Fahrenheit you will freeze. You can tell why you don't want to be frozen.
    
     The second reason that the cold is bad is because you can get a cold. If you do have warm clothing it is still possible that you can get a cold. Getting the cold is pretty much getting sick you should probably just get warm. Once I got such a bad cold that I couldn't leave the house for three days. Now you know why cold is bad because you can get sick.
     
     The third reason that cold is bad is the cold water. The water sometimes freezes if it is really cold. Sometimes you can be on the frozen water and the ice will crack and that won't be good. Once when I was a kid I was walking on a frozen lake and my foot got stuck in the ice. Cold water is another reason why cold weather is bad.
   
     I think cold weather is not good. The reasons I think it is bad are in this paper.

Big writing 11/30/11

Hi I assume that your here to read why the cold is bad. The first paragraph is about freezing. The second is about the getting a cold. The third paragraph is about the water. If you want to learn about it read on.
     As you know this paragraph is about freezing. If you don't have a sweater or any other thing to keep you warm in a cold spot it will be likely that you will die from the cold. If you go into really cold water about 15 degrees farenheight you will freeze in about 5 minutes. Once I heard about a person who had to swim in the in a cold ocean and ended up frozen. So if you want to read on.
     The second paragraph is about the flu. When I was talking about the first paragraph I said that if you are not wearing any warm clothing, but if you do have warm clothing it is still possible that you can get a cold. Getting the cold is pretty much getting sick you should probably just get warm. Once I got such a bad cold that I couldn't leave the house for three days. I will like it if you read on I hope you do.
      The third reason I don't like the cold is the cold water. The water sometimes freezes if it is really cold. Sometimes you can be on the frozen water and the ice will crack and that wont be good. Once when I was a kid I was walking on a frozen lake and my foot got stuck in the ice. That is why I cold weather is bad I hope you understand.

Friday, November 18, 2011

Civilwar







The Civil war was America’s bloodiest war by a lot. It all started when the Southern states had made the colored skins slaves. The Northern states of America said no to slavery. When the Southern heard about it they wanted to make their own slave country but, the Northern states would not allow it. So each made sides the Southern called them self's the Confederate. While the Northern called them self's the Union. The Union thought this will be a easy war because they were at war with only eleven states but, the Confederate was prepared to fight. The Confederate was winning at first but at the end the Northern won because of the president Abraham Lincoln. Every time in crises we wanted leaders a little bit better but Lincoln was really that good. At the last battle the leader of the Confederate states was found hiding during the war. The third day after the war Abe Lincoln was killed watching a play by a man who shot him in the ear. The man was named John Wilkes Booth a man who was angry about the Confederates loss. Abraham Lincoln died. Abe Lincoln was the first president ever to be assassinated.

Wednesday, November 16, 2011

draft 2

     Hi. I guess your here to see what I am going to like on Thanksgiving. The first thing I am going to do is go see my cousins Austin and Arron. Second I am going to see my Grandma. Third I get to have a feast with my cousins and my grandma. I cant wait to do all of this but, the sooner the better.

     The first thing I shall do is see my cousins. My first cousin is the oldest Austin he always is nice and is always playing around. The second is Arron he is extremely similar to Austin but, he is kind of growing a beard. Once they were playing with me and they were trying to lift me in the air and catch me. I love my cousins but, next I am going to see my Grandma.

     The second thing I am doing is see my grandma. My grandma is so nice and she makes a good meatloaf. She lets me go to the Varsity the best restaurant in the world. Once she let me go to the Varsity and let me have about 10 hamburgers. You see why I like my Grandma and it is a surprise that she making the whole thanksgiving feast.

     The third thing I am going to do is have a feast with my cousins and my grandma. My Grandma is likely make some meatloaf with the feast. The feast is for sure going to have a turkey. Once on Thanksgiving we had a turkey the size of a table. Isn't that a big turkey but, you should likely read on.

    Well that is all. I know that there is a lot of better thing to do on Thanksgiving but these are my favorite things to do.

Thanksgiving thanks

Hi I guess your here to see what I am going to like on Thanksgiving. The first thing I am going to do is go see my cousins Austin and Arron. Second I am going to see my Grandma. Third I get to have a feast with my cousins and my grandma. I cant wait to do all of this but, the sooner the better.




The first thing I shall do is see my cousins. My first cousin is the oldest Austin he always is nice and is always playing around. The second is Arron he is extremely similar to Austin but, he is kind of growing a beard. Once they were playing with me and they were trying to lift me in the air and catch me. I love my cousins but, next I am going to see my Grandma.




The second thing I am doing is see my grandma. My grandma is so nice and she makes a good meatloaf. She lets me go to the Varsity the best restaurant in the world. Once she let me go to the Varsity and let me have about 10 hamburgers. You see why I like my Grandma and it is a surprise that she making the whole thanksgiving feast.




The third thing I am going to do is have a feast with my cousins and my grandma. My Grandma is likely make some meatloaf with the feast. The feast is for sure going to have a turkey. Once on Thanksgiving we had a turkey the size of a table. Isn't that a big turkey but, you should likely read on.




Well that is all I hope you think it was interesting.

Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Draft 2


 What are you thankful for? I don't know about you but I am thankful for my puppy Mia which is in paragraph one. Also I am thankful for my puppy Lily which is in paragraph two. This is not really my favorite one but Mr. Randy is in paragraph three. Read more read on...




 I am thankful for my dog Mia. She is brave whenever she hears a doorbell ring she charges to the door and barks like a maniac. She also is scared when on wooden floors so she yelps until someone comes. Once she yelped for a hour until I came upstairs. That is why I am thankful for Mia.




The second thing I am thankful for is my puppy Lily. She is so cute and always misses us when gone. She loves to lick people nonstop .She never stop until you stop her. I remember when Lily licked me all over my whole body and never stopped. That is why I am thankful for Lily.




The third thing I am thankful for is Mr. Randy. Mr. Randy is a cool teacher that is a musical genius. He always lets us play games for about 30 minutes. Once we did not do anything else but play games. That is why I am thankful for Mr. Randy.




This is what I am thank for, if you had this you would be thankful to.I am thankful for my dog Mia, my dog Lily, and my teacher Mr. Randy.

What are you thankful for?

Big writing test

 What are you thankful for. I don't know about you but I am thankful for my puppy Mia which is in paragraph 1. Also I am thankful for my puppy Lily which is on paragraph 2. This is not really my favorite one but Mr. Randy is on paragraph 3. Read more read on...




 I am thankful for my dog Mia. She is brave when ever she hears a doorbell ring she charges to the door and barks like a maniac. She also is scared when on wooden floors so she yelps until someone came. Once she yelped for a our until I came upstairs. That is why I am thankful for Mia.




The second thing I am thankful for is my puppy Lily. She is so cute and always misses us when gone. She loves to lick people nonstop she never stop until you don't let her. I remember when Lily licked me all over my whole body and never stopped. That is why I am thankful for Lily.




The third thing I am thankful for Mr. Randy. Mr. Randy is a cool teacher that is a musical genius. He always lets us play games for about 30 minutes. Once we did not do anything else but play games. That is why I am thankful for Mr. Randy. This is what I am thank for, if you had this you would be thankful for it to.