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     Warning: The title has nothing to do with the story.
     Once there was a prince named Alphonse. His father was the King of Aniliance. He was the richest man in all the land. The materials in his bed were so soft it put silk out of business. Every corner of
his castle shines. His castle was so shiny you can see your own reflection.     Even though this prince lives in this master piece he calls home  he was very sad. He was so sad he could not contain it. No matter how much jewels his Dad gives him and no matter how much gold he has Alphonse was just not happy. The only people that make him happy is his Mother and Sister. Yet his mother died when he was 5 years old. He has been sad ever since.
     Not even his sister Melinda who he loved so much fills the gap in his heart. Though she is the only happiness he has. There is only one problem his sister is leaving the castle forever. He said he wanted to stay with her but, his father refused to let him. The only person who understands him is his grandfather yet he is not a friend like his sister.
     Right after his sister left prince Alphonse ran to his room crying but did not know what to do. So all he could think of doing is running not wondering where it will take him. So he ran, ran like there was no tomorrow. Right when he thought there was no hope of living Alphonse ended up finding his sister. He said He ran away hoping to find something to help me and I found you. Melinda saw tear drops in his eyes. So she decided to let Alphonse come along. Back at the kingdom his father has noticed that Alphonse has left so he brought every kingdom soldier he had. Right when he told the soldiers to find Alphonse, Alphonse's grandfather of Alphonse barged in furiously. He told everyone to abort mission and go home.
     Alphonse's father was furious he was yelling "Why did you do... Stop this at once" Alphonse's grand father interrupted. This is the whole reason that Alphonse left in the first place. Do you think he left because he missed his sister? Or is it that if Melinda leaves he will be all alone with his father that bribes him for happiness
     So the king asked "What should I do?"
     He does not want to be found by high class soldiers he wants to be found by his own father Alphonse's grandfather replied.
     Meanwhile at in the woods Alphonse and Melinda were building a fire. Melinda said Shh I heard something in the woods. Alphonse heard it to. He was scared it got closer and closer until he saw a familiar face. It was Alphonse's father. He looked at both of them and smiled and hugged them. Then the king said thank to Melinda thanks for taking care of Alphonse. Then looked at Alphonse and said I am sorry, so so sorry. Alphonse said no need I should just thank you for trying but, just know this I love you but I need my sister. I will come to the castle every day if I have to just please let me come with her. And so the king declared that Alphonse can live with his sister and that day and Alphonse was never sad again.

Relating Ranger Rhonda

Hello I am here to tell you why I am related and not related to Ranger Rhonda a person in the story. In the story Ranger Rhonda is trying to arrest illegal hunters and I would do that to because I hate hunting. Ranger Rhonda is a girl I'm not. Ranger Rhonda is the leader ranger I am related to her because I usually wanna be the leader. I hope you can see why I'm related to Ranger Rhonda.

Draft 2

     Millions of people go to Washington DC and here is why. The first thing you would want to see is that you can meet the president. Second you will be able to have a tour to the White house. The final reason you will want to go to Washington DC is you can learn about Abraham Lincoln. You have millions of choices to choose from but I think you should go to these places.
     The first thing you would want to go to to DC. as you know is to meet the president. You will be able to know what he does, what is his work, and why he works there. You might be able to eat dinner with him. One time my dad got a gift of him shaking hands with the president. I can tell you that if you meet the president you will enjoy it.
      The second is that you can go to the White house for a tour. If you will have a tour you can see the pictures of every presidents. You will also see every room in the white house. Once I was going to have a tour but we could not cause the plane was on the same day. I hope that everyone can see the White house.
     The final reason you can go to DC. is you can learn about Abe Lincoln. I know that he was the president in the Civil war Americas bloodiest war by a lot. Abe Lincoln is my favorite president. I remember one time when I saw the exact place Abraham Lincoln was assassinated. Abe Lincoln was the first president to be assassinated.
     There are a million of amazing places in DC yet I only showed you three because they are my favorite. I hope one day everyone can go to Washington DC.

4/9/12

Hello I assume you are here to learn why you should go to Washington DC. The first thing you would want to see is that you can meet the president. Second you will be able to have a tour to the White house. The final reason you will want to go to Washington DC. is you can learn about Abraham Lincoln. You have millions of choices to choose from but I think you should go to these places.
     The first thing you would want to go to to DC. as you know is to meet the president. You will be able to know what he does, what is his work, and why he works there. You might be able to eat dinner with him. One time my dad got a gift of him shaking hands with the president. I can tell you that if you meet the president you will enjoy it.
      The second is that you can go to the White house for a tour. If you will have a tour you can see the pictures of every presidents. You will also see every room in the white house. Once I was going to have a tour but we could not cause the plane was on the same day. I hope that everyone can see the White house.
     The final reason you can go to DC. is you can learn about Abe Lincoln. I know that he was the president in the Civil war Americas bloodiest war by a lot. Abe Lincoln is my favorite president. I remember one time when I saw the exact place Abraham Lincoln was assassinated. Abe Lincoln was the first president to be assassinated.
     There are a million of amazing places in DC. yet I only showed you three because they are my favorite. I hope one day everyone can go to Washington DC.

Draft 2

     Why do we have laws? Well this will shows you why. The first reason will tell you why they have rules in sports. Then the next explanation will tell you why we have laws of order. The finally I will tell you why we have rules in school. Without rules you can not believe the chaos in this world.
     The first reason as you know is why we have rules in sports. The rule in many sports is no fighting each other. If we did not have rules like this people would fight till the end of the game. One time I watched a football game and one person was so angry he push a person on the other team and had a 5 yard penalty. Obviously you need rules in sports so it will not be horror.
     This is the second paragraph and you can see that the paragraph is about why we have laws of order. A important law to follow is you can not have a gun unless you have a license for it. If people did not follow this law million of people would walk around with guns and you can never trust any one. I remember I saw on the news once that a person was kidnapped by his father and could not ask anything because his father had a gun. You can see that  if millions of people have guns it will not be a safe environment.
     The last reason we have laws is why we have rules at school. There are lots of rules to follow at school and lots of schools have fighting at school property. You know why they have that rule so you must follow it or there will be a giant mob fighting. Well you can see that you do not want a giant fighting mob.
     There are a million of important laws yet I only showed you three because they are my favorite it will be interesting to see the laws of the future.

4/2/12

     Why do we have laws? Well this will shows you why. The first paragraph will tell you why they have rules in sports. Then the next paragraph will tell us why we have laws of order. The last paragraph will tell you why we have rules in school. I hope you have liked this because I have a lot more coming.
     The first reason as you know is why we have rules in sports. The rule in many sports is no fighting each other. If we did not have rules like this people would fight till the end of the game. One time I watched a football game and one person was so angry he push a person on the other team and had a 5 yard penalty. I like this paragraph and if you do you will love the next one.
     This is the second paragraph and you can see that the paragraph is about why we have laws of order. A important law to follow is you can not have a gun unless you have a license for it. If people did not follow this law million of people would walk around with guns and you can never trust any one. I remember I saw on the news once that a person was kidnapped by his father and could not ask anything because his father had a gun. You would be afraid to if you were kidnapped by a man with a gun but you are not so you can read on.
     The last reason we have laws is why we have rules at school. There are lots of rules to follow at school and lots of schools have fighting at school property. You know why they have that rule so you must follow it or there will be a giant mob fighting. I hope you enjoyed all of this and there is a bit more yet I hope you like it.
     There are a million of important laws yet I only showed you three because they are my favorite so I hope you liked it.