draft 2

     "Ive been waiting for you''said a mysterious voice to John. Oh silly me you know nothing right now I will tell you whats going on.
     John is at his sleep over with his friends Will,Zack,and Alex and when he was going to get the popcorn they were gone. ''Where is everybody''John asked himself. He searched everywhere but, he just could not find them but he did not search the attic. He did not because it is pitch black there. ''But I guess I do not have a choice''John said to himself. When he came in the door slammed behind him. He ran to the door with all his might to the to the door to open it again but, it was locked. And now here is where we started.
     ''Ive been waiting for you''said a m mysterious voice to John.
     ''Who are you what do you what do you want from me''asked John.
     ''HELP ME''Said Will.
     ''ME TOO'' begged Zack.
     ''I am going to kill you but, first''said the voice.
     ''You got pranked''said the voice that was really Alex.
     ''What''said John.
     ''We planned this the whole time''said Will.
     ''So how do we get out''asked John.
     ''Oops''said Will.
     ''What did you do''asked Alex.
     ''I dropped the key''said Will.
     ''OK you know how to get out of here''asked John.
     ''No''said Will. ''Ok''said John.
     ''LET ME OUTTA HERE!!!!"