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     I love Florida! Oh hi I guess your here to see the reason why Florida is great well the first reason Florida is great is that there is gulf world zoo. The second reason Florida is great is that it has TESLA the school. The third reason Florida is great is that it has the greatest beach of all time. To learn more read on.
      The first reason Florida is great as you know is gulf world zoo. Gulf world is a zoo with Marian life and birds. I got to learn there are Australian penguins there. Once I got to see the Australian penguins out of their cage and even hold one. That is the first reason Florida is great.
      The second reason Florida is great is you guessed it TESLA the school. It is a computer school they only use computers.They always let you play games until the beginning of school. One day I got to play for 40 minutes straight because only one person was not here. That is another reason Florida is great.
      The Third reason Florida is great is of course the beach. The beach in Florida is one of the biggest beaches ever. Everyday you would want to be there. Once I stayed at the beach for 12 hours straight. That was the last reason Florida is great.

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