White tigers have a lot of advantages and disadvantages.

Thesis sentence (driving question or sentence):

Main idea 1: White tigers advantages.

Main idea 2: White tigers disadvantages.

Main idea 3: How cutting white tigers fur helps them hunt but not help them live.

Main idea 1: White tigers advantages.

Proof (1): They can swim.

Proof (2): They can run really fast.

Illustration or research point (has a time word and research example): One time I saw a white tiger at the zoo swimming to catch a fish.

Conclusion (say your main idea again in a different and more interesting way): Now I hope you understand the advantages of the white tigers.

   

Main idea 2: White tigers disadvantages.

Proof (1): They can't blend it to their surroundings because of their white fur.

Proof (2): There hair grows to easily and they can hot really quickly because of all that fur.

Illustration or research point (has a time word and research example): Once on TV there was a white tiger who couldn't blend in and his prey ran away.

Conclusion (say your main idea again in a different and more interesting way): There you have it now you know the disadvantages of being a white tiger.

Main idea 3: How cutting white tigers fur helps them hunt but not help them live.

Proof (1): You can blend in more in the safari.

Proof (2): At night the white tiger can freeze to death.

Illustration or research point (has a time word and research example): I remember when there was a video where a shaved white tiger caught his prey because of he could blend in.

Conclusion (say your main idea again in a different and more interesting way): I hope you can see that if white tigers shave their fur it will make they cold but they can hunt easier.

Conclusion: White tigers have a lot of advantages and disadvantages.

Sentence with your main ideas in it: Now I bet you now understand why the white tigers have advantages and disadvantages at hunting.

Final points that support your ideas:

Personal connection: I hope one day I can see a real white tiger in action.

Overall conclusion: I can see you stayed and read this book thanks and now goodbye.