Draft 2

    I went to a Wolf exhibit on Friday located in Chipley Florida with my school. The reason I went there was to see this fascinating species. While I was there I learned these three thing and I will never forget them. First I learned wolfs are endangered species. The second thing I learned is that the wolf is a fascinating species. I also learned that the wolf is a Keystone species. I hope you will enjoy what I have learned.

     First I learned as you know is the wolf is a endangered species. Wolf have lost 40% of there kind in just one year. These amazing creatures are being killed almost every day by hunters. I remember that a man trapped a wolf and put him on a street and any person can drive over and shoot the dog. I can not stand the thought of that.
     The second thing I learned is that a wolf is a fascinating species. One of the reason why a wolf is a fascinating species is that it can run 45 miles per hour and he uses this speed to catch his prey. The wolf can also withstand very cold temperatures because of its layered fur. Every wolf in a pack has a job. Even the lowest rank of wolf Omega has a important job of taking care of the young. I think this is fascinating because if a wolf does not do his job  there will be problems in the pack.

      The third thing I also learned is that a wolf is a key stone species. I always thing of every keystone as a old wall. So if you lose that brick it stone all be tumbling down. The reason wolfs are keystone species is that is that lots of animals depend on them. When the wolfs eat there food when they are done they give it to the little animals. One time I ran I came to a museum based on keystones and they told me that one day the wolfs will be gone.

     I really like wolf and I hope after reading this you do to.

Big writing

     I went to a Wolf exhibit on Friday located in Chipley Florida with my school. The reason I went there was to see this fascinating species. While I was there I learned these three thing and I will never forget them. First I learned wolfs are endangered species. The second thing I learned is that the wolf is a fascinating species. I also learned that the wolf is a Keystone species. I hope you will enjoy what I have learned.

     First I learned as you know is the wolf is a endangered species. Wolf have lost 40% of there kind in just one year. These amazing creatures are being killed almost every day by hunters. I remember that a man trapped a wolf and put him on a street and any person can drive over and shoot the dog. I can not stand the thought of that.
     The second thing I learned is that a wolf is
a fascinating species. One of the reason why a wolf is a fascinating species is that it can run 45 miles per hour and he uses this speed to catch his prey. The wolf can also withstand very cold temperatures because of its layered fur. Every wolf in a pack has a job. Even the lowest rank of wolf Omega has a important job of taking care of the young. I think this is fascinating because if a wolf does not do his job  there will be problems in the pack. I hope you like this is not even the best part.

      The third thing I also learned is that a wolf is a key stone species. I always thing of every keystone as a old wall. So if you lose that brick it stone all be tumbling down. One time I ran I came to a museum based on keystones and they told me that one day the wolfs will be gone. I hope you like this because there is more.

     I really like wolf and I hope after reading this you do to.

Arctic wolfs

The Arctic Wolf inhabits the Canadian Arctic and the island parts of Alaska and northern part of Greenland. Their habitat extends from 70 degrees North latitude and higher. They have lived in North America for over two million years. When they find a den they make a couple of chambers for food and young.
The Arctic Wolf is the only subspecies of the Gray Wolf that still can be found over the whole of its original range largely because in their natural habitat they rarely encounter humans.The Arctic wolf is also the only subspecies of wolf which is not threatened their remote home means that they are relatively safe from man's activities both in terms of hunting and habitat destruction.

Millions of people go to Washington DC and the reason is that they have a wax museum.The first reason that the museum is amazing is that it has wax presidents. The second is that they have celebrates. The final reason is that it has sports people made out of wax. I hope you like it cause there is more.
     The first reason the wax museum rocks is that it has wax presidents. I have a picture of the greatest wax president Abraham Lincoln. I even got to see a picture of George Bush next to president. Once I got a picture of the wax Abe Lincoln and my friend thought it was real. I hope you like this is not even the best part.
     The second is that they have celebrates made of wax. I saw the Rock and I thought he was real. I saw the I thought it was a old museum but now it even has Selina Gomez. Once I saw my best friend and he said he would give me five bucks if he saw a picture of the Rock I toke a picture of the wax him and he gave me five bucks. I hope that everyone can see the wax celebrate.
     The final reason is that there is sport people made out of wax. There is a person that is wearing a hockey mask and lost all his teeth as a wax sculpture. There is even a picture of a man throwing a football. I remember when there was a man that through a football and I got hit with it because I thought he was a wax figure. This ismy favorite part but there is some more I hope you read it.
     There are a million of reasons the wax museum yet I only showed you three because they are my favorite. I hope one day everyone can go to the wax museum.

The very very very very very very very ugly hippo

     Warning: The title has nothing to do with the story.
     Once there was a prince named Alphonse. His father was the King of Aniliance. He was the richest man in all the land. The materials in his bed were so soft it put silk out of business. Every corner of
his castle shines. His castle was so shiny you can see your own reflection.     Even though this prince lives in this master piece he calls home  he was very sad. He was so sad he could not contain it. No matter how much jewels his Dad gives him and no matter how much gold he has Alphonse was just not happy. The only people that make him happy is his Mother and Sister. Yet his mother died when he was 5 years old. He has been sad ever since.
     Not even his sister Melinda who he loved so much fills the gap in his heart. Though she is the only happiness he has. There is only one problem his sister is leaving the castle forever. He said he wanted to stay with her but, his father refused to let him. The only person who understands him is his grandfather yet he is not a friend like his sister.
     Right after his sister left prince Alphonse ran to his room crying but did not know what to do. So all he could think of doing is running not wondering where it will take him. So he ran, ran like there was no tomorrow. Right when he thought there was no hope of living Alphonse ended up finding his sister. He said He ran away hoping to find something to help me and I found you. Melinda saw tear drops in his eyes. So she decided to let Alphonse come along. Back at the kingdom his father has noticed that Alphonse has left so he brought every kingdom soldier he had. Right when he told the soldiers to find Alphonse, Alphonse's grandfather of Alphonse barged in furiously. He told everyone to abort mission and go home.
     Alphonse's father was furious he was yelling "Why did you do... Stop this at once" Alphonse's grand father interrupted. This is the whole reason that Alphonse left in the first place. Do you think he left because he missed his sister? Or is it that if Melinda leaves he will be all alone with his father that bribes him for happiness
     So the king asked "What should I do?"
     He does not want to be found by high class soldiers he wants to be found by his own father Alphonse's grandfather replied.
     Meanwhile at in the woods Alphonse and Melinda were building a fire. Melinda said Shh I heard something in the woods. Alphonse heard it to. He was scared it got closer and closer until he saw a familiar face. It was Alphonse's father. He looked at both of them and smiled and hugged them. Then the king said thank to Melinda thanks for taking care of Alphonse. Then looked at Alphonse and said I am sorry, so so sorry. Alphonse said no need I should just thank you for trying but, just know this I love you but I need my sister. I will come to the castle every day if I have to just please let me come with her. And so the king declared that Alphonse can live with his sister and that day and Alphonse was never sad again.

Relating Ranger Rhonda

Hello I am here to tell you why I am related and not related to Ranger Rhonda a person in the story. In the story Ranger Rhonda is trying to arrest illegal hunters and I would do that to because I hate hunting. Ranger Rhonda is a girl I'm not. Ranger Rhonda is the leader ranger I am related to her because I usually wanna be the leader. I hope you can see why I'm related to Ranger Rhonda.

Draft 2

     Millions of people go to Washington DC and here is why. The first thing you would want to see is that you can meet the president. Second you will be able to have a tour to the White house. The final reason you will want to go to Washington DC is you can learn about Abraham Lincoln. You have millions of choices to choose from but I think you should go to these places.
     The first thing you would want to go to to DC. as you know is to meet the president. You will be able to know what he does, what is his work, and why he works there. You might be able to eat dinner with him. One time my dad got a gift of him shaking hands with the president. I can tell you that if you meet the president you will enjoy it.
      The second is that you can go to the White house for a tour. If you will have a tour you can see the pictures of every presidents. You will also see every room in the white house. Once I was going to have a tour but we could not cause the plane was on the same day. I hope that everyone can see the White house.
     The final reason you can go to DC. is you can learn about Abe Lincoln. I know that he was the president in the Civil war Americas bloodiest war by a lot. Abe Lincoln is my favorite president. I remember one time when I saw the exact place Abraham Lincoln was assassinated. Abe Lincoln was the first president to be assassinated.
     There are a million of amazing places in DC yet I only showed you three because they are my favorite. I hope one day everyone can go to Washington DC.

4/9/12

Hello I assume you are here to learn why you should go to Washington DC. The first thing you would want to see is that you can meet the president. Second you will be able to have a tour to the White house. The final reason you will want to go to Washington DC. is you can learn about Abraham Lincoln. You have millions of choices to choose from but I think you should go to these places.
     The first thing you would want to go to to DC. as you know is to meet the president. You will be able to know what he does, what is his work, and why he works there. You might be able to eat dinner with him. One time my dad got a gift of him shaking hands with the president. I can tell you that if you meet the president you will enjoy it.
      The second is that you can go to the White house for a tour. If you will have a tour you can see the pictures of every presidents. You will also see every room in the white house. Once I was going to have a tour but we could not cause the plane was on the same day. I hope that everyone can see the White house.
     The final reason you can go to DC. is you can learn about Abe Lincoln. I know that he was the president in the Civil war Americas bloodiest war by a lot. Abe Lincoln is my favorite president. I remember one time when I saw the exact place Abraham Lincoln was assassinated. Abe Lincoln was the first president to be assassinated.
     There are a million of amazing places in DC. yet I only showed you three because they are my favorite. I hope one day everyone can go to Washington DC.

Draft 2

     Why do we have laws? Well this will shows you why. The first reason will tell you why they have rules in sports. Then the next explanation will tell you why we have laws of order. The finally I will tell you why we have rules in school. Without rules you can not believe the chaos in this world.
     The first reason as you know is why we have rules in sports. The rule in many sports is no fighting each other. If we did not have rules like this people would fight till the end of the game. One time I watched a football game and one person was so angry he push a person on the other team and had a 5 yard penalty. Obviously you need rules in sports so it will not be horror.
     This is the second paragraph and you can see that the paragraph is about why we have laws of order. A important law to follow is you can not have a gun unless you have a license for it. If people did not follow this law million of people would walk around with guns and you can never trust any one. I remember I saw on the news once that a person was kidnapped by his father and could not ask anything because his father had a gun. You can see that  if millions of people have guns it will not be a safe environment.
     The last reason we have laws is why we have rules at school. There are lots of rules to follow at school and lots of schools have fighting at school property. You know why they have that rule so you must follow it or there will be a giant mob fighting. Well you can see that you do not want a giant fighting mob.
     There are a million of important laws yet I only showed you three because they are my favorite it will be interesting to see the laws of the future.

4/2/12

     Why do we have laws? Well this will shows you why. The first paragraph will tell you why they have rules in sports. Then the next paragraph will tell us why we have laws of order. The last paragraph will tell you why we have rules in school. I hope you have liked this because I have a lot more coming.
     The first reason as you know is why we have rules in sports. The rule in many sports is no fighting each other. If we did not have rules like this people would fight till the end of the game. One time I watched a football game and one person was so angry he push a person on the other team and had a 5 yard penalty. I like this paragraph and if you do you will love the next one.
     This is the second paragraph and you can see that the paragraph is about why we have laws of order. A important law to follow is you can not have a gun unless you have a license for it. If people did not follow this law million of people would walk around with guns and you can never trust any one. I remember I saw on the news once that a person was kidnapped by his father and could not ask anything because his father had a gun. You would be afraid to if you were kidnapped by a man with a gun but you are not so you can read on.
     The last reason we have laws is why we have rules at school. There are lots of rules to follow at school and lots of schools have fighting at school property. You know why they have that rule so you must follow it or there will be a giant mob fighting. I hope you enjoyed all of this and there is a bit more yet I hope you like it.
     There are a million of important laws yet I only showed you three because they are my favorite so I hope you liked it.

Draft 2

     Have you ever seen a axolotl? If you have not it is one of the greatest animals of all time. The first thing I will discuss is how they can turn into a salamander. The second thing I will discuss is how they can grow lost limps. The final reason that I like the axolotl is how it has bigger gills when there is less oxygen in the water. If you are interested read on.
     The first reason I like the axolotl is they can turn to salamander. They just need to have salamander goo in the water or a chip infecting the water for it to turn to salamanders. When they turn to salamanders they will have to stay that way though. Once I heard a song saying how sad a salamander is that he is not a axolotl any more. I hope you enjoyed this cause there is more coming.
     The second reason I like axolotls is that they can grow lost limbs. The can regrow every body part that they have. Scientist use axolotls for scientific facts to help people gain lost limbs. Once one of my teacher had everyone try to discover what makes axolotls grow lost limbs. I hope you like this and I hope you will like whats next.
     The final reason I like axolotls is they have bigger gills when the lakes have less oxygen. Scientist use axolotls to see how much oxygen there is in water. The smaller the gill the more the oxygen. Once I made a picture of a axolotl with giant gills. I hope you enjoyed this cause there is one last thing to show you.
     You can see axolotls are really unique they can turn to salamander, they can grow lost limb, and they have bigger gills when there is less oxygen in the water. Now you know the amazement of the great axolotls I hope you can enjoy them as much as me.

3/19/12

Have you ever seen a axolotl? If you have not it is one of the greatest animals of all time. The first thing I will discuss is how they can turn into a salamander. The second thing I will discuss is how they can grow lost limps. The final reason that I like the axolotl is how it has bigger gills when there is less oxygen in the water. If you are interested read on.
     The first reason I like the axolotl is they can turn to salamander. They just need to have salamander goo in the water or a chip infecting the water for it to turn to salamanders. When they turn to salamanders they will have to stay that way though. Once I heard a song saying how sad a salamander is that he is not a axolotl any more. I hope you enjoyed this cause there is more coming.
     The second reason I like axolotls is that they can grow lost limbs. The can regrow every body part that they have. Scientist use axolotls for scientific facts to help people gain lost limbs. Once one of my teacher had everyone try to discover what makes axolotls grow lost limbs. I hope you like this and I hope you will like whats next.
     The final reason I like axolotls is they have bigger gills when the lakes have less oxygen. Scientist use axolotls to see how much oxygen there is in water. The smaller the gill the more the oxygen. Once I made a picture of a axolotl with giant gills. I hope you enjoyed this cause there is one last thing to show you.
     I like axolotls for many reason but I used my best 3 I hope you enjoyed them.

Draft 2

     Once there was a kid named Jake. Jake was extremely strong, fast, and smart but one day when he came to a library Jake discovered a new type of strength. Jake looked at the books shelve when he came upon a book that seemed interesting it was called Planet Cronus!
     When he came to the check out the librarian said to never read the ending page! Jake thought she was just crazy and bought it and planed to read the ending page just for a big laugh. The time Jake ended the book he was read the final page and it said I can see you failed to believe what I said so feel my wrath. Right after that thunder struck the house and some he could not move.
     When he woke up Jake noticed that he was not a human he was a Gorilla person and he remembered a picture of the planet Cronus and he noticed he was on planet Cronus! He also saw a tiger person, a wolf person, and the most fierce of all a lion person. Jake thought they would attack him but he noticed they were as scared as he was but not the Lion. He told everyone how he got here and they said the same thing. They said the person who ruled this place was also the person that put them there. He noticed that they need to come back home so they thought they needed to think up a plan to stop the ruler and bring them back home. When he got a smart thought out plan he told everyone but the Lion said no.
     He said that he was the ruler once until he came along and kick him off of his own thrown. After that he left and we came to spring our plan into action. They all came to face the Ruler but it had the same voice of the librarian.
     It was the librarian he said I knew you would read it and I am here to teach you a lesson you will never forget. He ended up turning into Komodo Dragon. We all attack him but failed we were all passed out and he said ... Jake you have been a thorn in my plan long enough and now I will take care of you permanently.
     Right at that second the lion came out and attacked the Komodo Dragon and said there can only be one king and that is me! Right after that a portal opened up to lead them home. We were about to leave when he stopped them to ask if the Lion was coming? He said no Jake and he said that there needs to be a king here and I need to be it. The Tiger left. The Wolf left but Jake paused to say thank you thank you for every thing and goodbye forever.

Saving planet Cronus

Once there was a kid named Jake. Jake was extremely strong, fast, and smart but one day when he came to the library and he discovered a new type of strength. Jake looked at the books shelve when he came upon a book that seemed interesting it was called Planet Cronus! When he came to the check out the librarian said to never read the ending page! Jake thought she was just crazy and bought it and planed to read the ending page just for a big laugh. The time Jake ended the book he was read the final page and it said I can see you failed to believe what I said so feel my wrath. Right after that thunder struck the house and some he could move and when he woke up Jake noticed that he was not a human he was a Gorilla person and he remembered a picture of the planet Cronus and he noticed he was on planet Cronus! He also saw a tiger person, a wolf person, and the most fierce of all a lion person. Jake thought they would attack him but he noticed they were as scared as he was but not the Lion. He told everyone how he got here and they said the same thing. They said the person who ruled this place was also the person that put them there. He noticed that they need to come back home so they thought they needed to think up a plan to stop the ruler and bring them back home. When he got a smart thought out plan he told everyone but the Lion said no. He said that he was the ruler once until he came along and kick him off of his own thrown. After that he left and we came to spring our plan into action. They all came to face the Ruler but it had the same voice of the librarian. It was the librarian he said I knew you would read it and I am here to teach you a lesson you will never forget. He ended up turning into Komodo Dragon. We all attack him but failed we were all passed out and he said ... Jake you have been a thorn in my plan long enough and now I will take care of you permanently. Right at that second the lion came out and attacked the Komodo Dragon and said there can only be one king and that is me! Right after that a portal opened up to lead them home. We were about to leave when he stopped them to ask if the Lion was coming? He said no Jake and he said that there needs to be a king here and I need to be it. The Tiger left. The Wolf left but Jake paused to say thank you thank you for every thing and goodbye forever.

Draft 2

     Nice kick! Hi I guess your here to see what I like to do.  First I love to play soccer as you can see from the first sentence. The second thing I like to do is play on the computer. And the last thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. If you want to know more read on.
     The first thing I like to do as you know is soccer. I like play soccer is because I like to run around and score goals. Also I like how at the end of my practice my my team runs as fast as possible and see who is the fastest. Once a friend and I ran and it always and ended with a tie. So you can see that is why I like to play soccer and you can see more if you read on.
     Another hobby I like to do is play on the computer. My favorite computer game is poptropica. Here is how you play it. There are island in poptropica where their are thing that are people in danger and you have to save them. Once on one island you have to save the world from destruction. I hope you enjoyed that and you can learn more is you read on.
     The final thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. My favorite game to play is called Flip note studios. How to play Flip note studios is you make pictures of anything and you put some music on and you put it on the internet. Once I played Flip note studios and I made a ten minute song and put it on the internet. That is all the things I like to do or play but there is more so read on.
     Well you can see that this is the end I hope you enjoyed it while you could.

2/27/12

     Nice kick! Hi I guess your here to see what I like to do.  First I love to play soccer as you can see from the first sentence. The second thing I like to do is play on the computer. And the last thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. If you want to know more read on.
     The first thing I like to do as you know is soccer. I like play soccer is because I like to run around and score goals. Also I like how at the end of my practice my my team runs as fast as possible and see who is the fastest. Once a friend and I ran and it always and ended with a tie. So you can see that is why I like to play soccer and you can see more if you read on.
     The second thing I like to do is play on the computer. My favorite computer game is poptropica. Here is how you play it there are island in poptropica where their are thing that are people in danger and you have to save them. Once on one island you have to save the world from destruction. I hope you enjoyed that and you can learn more is you read on.
     The final thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. My favorite game to play is called Flip note studios.How to play Flip note studios is you make pictures of anything and you put some music on and you put it on the internet. Once I played Flip note studios and I made a ten minute song and put it on the internet. That is all the things I like to do or play but there is more so read on.
     Well you can see that this is the end I hope you enjoyed it while you could.

Poem of India

      I see greatness yes I do I see greatness how about you.  

     I see amazement in the air I see amazement that deserves some care. 

     The amazement is life and it is all around some is lost and some is found.

     India is my a my favorite place to be that is why I like it between you and me. 

     In India there are a million things to see including the Taj Mahal that is where I want to be. 

     In India that is a place where I want to roam and also it is a place I want to call home.

 

Sources:http://www.indiaplaces.com/img/taj-mahal-background-02.jpg    http://images02.olx.in/ui/10/15/70/1292239675_146251570_2-Visit-IndiaPlaces-in-India-to-Visit-Delhi-1292239675.jpg

Draft 2

     I love bridges I see that you might not like them now but just wait and you will love them. The first bridge is the Magdeburg Water Bridge. The second bridge is the Ponte Vecchio. The third and the greatest paragraph is about the Rolling Bridge. You see that you should read on.

     First let me tell you about the Magdeburg Water Bridge. The Magdeburg Water Bridge is the biggest bridge in Europe. The Magdeburg Water Bridge is one of the only bridges that is used for boats. One time I went to the bridge and got to see that the bridge is really filled with water. This is the reason why I love the Magdeburg Water Bridge I hope you read on to see the other bridges. 

     Let me also explain to you about the Ponte Vecchio bridge. It is  in Italy and the oldest of its kind. It was originally built of wood until destroyed and they learned that they should use stone. The first time I saw the bridge it looked like it was a restaurant. That is why I love the Ponte Vecchio bridge and I hope you learned to like it to.

     Last but not least is the Rolling Bridge also known as the bridge that curls up on itself. It is located in London where it looks amazing I may add. It is amazing because when a car gets on it it makes a circular form. I really wish that one day I can finally be there to see it myself. I really hope you enjoyed learning about this bridge.

     As you can see that these bridges each have different kinds of ways you use them and that is why I chose to do bridges.

Big Writing Bridges

I love bridges I see that you might not like them now but just wait and you will luv love them. The first bridge is the Magdeburg Water Bridge. The second bridge is the Ponte Vecchio. The third and the greatest paragraph is about the Rolling Bridge. You see that you should read on.

     The first paragraph as you know is about the Magdeburg Water Bridge. The Magdeburg Water Bridge is the biggest bridge in Europe. The Magdeburg Water Bridge is one of the only bridges that is used for boats. One time I went to the bridge and got to see that the bridge is really filled with water. This is the reason why I love the Magdeburg Water Bridge I hope you read on to see the other bridges. 

     The second paragraph is about the Ponte Vecchio bridge. It is  in Italy and the oldest of its kind. It was originally built of wood until destroyed and they learned that they should use stone. The first time I saw the bridge it looked like it was a restaurant. That is why I luv love the Ponte Vecchio bridge I hope you learned to like it to.

     Last but not least is the Rolling Bridge also known as the bridge that curls up on itself. It is located in London where it looks amazing I may add. While in its position the bridge is a normal inconspicuous steel and timber footbridge fully open it forms a circle.I really wish that one day I can finally be there to see it myself. I really hope you enjoyed this now theres is one more to go. 

     As you can see that these bridges each have different kinds of ways you use them and that is why I chose to do bridges.