Draft 2

     Nice kick! Hi I guess your here to see what I like to do.  First I love to play soccer as you can see from the first sentence. The second thing I like to do is play on the computer. And the last thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. If you want to know more read on.
     The first thing I like to do as you know is soccer. I like play soccer is because I like to run around and score goals. Also I like how at the end of my practice my my team runs as fast as possible and see who is the fastest. Once a friend and I ran and it always and ended with a tie. So you can see that is why I like to play soccer and you can see more if you read on.
     Another hobby I like to do is play on the computer. My favorite computer game is poptropica. Here is how you play it. There are island in poptropica where their are thing that are people in danger and you have to save them. Once on one island you have to save the world from destruction. I hope you enjoyed that and you can learn more is you read on.
     The final thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. My favorite game to play is called Flip note studios. How to play Flip note studios is you make pictures of anything and you put some music on and you put it on the internet. Once I played Flip note studios and I made a ten minute song and put it on the internet. That is all the things I like to do or play but there is more so read on.
     Well you can see that this is the end I hope you enjoyed it while you could.