Draft 2

     Once there was a kid named Jake. Jake was extremely strong, fast, and smart but one day when he came to a library Jake discovered a new type of strength. Jake looked at the books shelve when he came upon a book that seemed interesting it was called Planet Cronus!
     When he came to the check out the librarian said to never read the ending page! Jake thought she was just crazy and bought it and planed to read the ending page just for a big laugh. The time Jake ended the book he was read the final page and it said I can see you failed to believe what I said so feel my wrath. Right after that thunder struck the house and some he could not move.
     When he woke up Jake noticed that he was not a human he was a Gorilla person and he remembered a picture of the planet Cronus and he noticed he was on planet Cronus! He also saw a tiger person, a wolf person, and the most fierce of all a lion person. Jake thought they would attack him but he noticed they were as scared as he was but not the Lion. He told everyone how he got here and they said the same thing. They said the person who ruled this place was also the person that put them there. He noticed that they need to come back home so they thought they needed to think up a plan to stop the ruler and bring them back home. When he got a smart thought out plan he told everyone but the Lion said no.
     He said that he was the ruler once until he came along and kick him off of his own thrown. After that he left and we came to spring our plan into action. They all came to face the Ruler but it had the same voice of the librarian.
     It was the librarian he said I knew you would read it and I am here to teach you a lesson you will never forget. He ended up turning into Komodo Dragon. We all attack him but failed we were all passed out and he said ... Jake you have been a thorn in my plan long enough and now I will take care of you permanently.
     Right at that second the lion came out and attacked the Komodo Dragon and said there can only be one king and that is me! Right after that a portal opened up to lead them home. We were about to leave when he stopped them to ask if the Lion was coming? He said no Jake and he said that there needs to be a king here and I need to be it. The Tiger left. The Wolf left but Jake paused to say thank you thank you for every thing and goodbye forever.