Draft 2

     Have you ever seen a axolotl? If you have not it is one of the greatest animals of all time. The first thing I will discuss is how they can turn into a salamander. The second thing I will discuss is how they can grow lost limps. The final reason that I like the axolotl is how it has bigger gills when there is less oxygen in the water. If you are interested read on.
     The first reason I like the axolotl is they can turn to salamander. They just need to have salamander goo in the water or a chip infecting the water for it to turn to salamanders. When they turn to salamanders they will have to stay that way though. Once I heard a song saying how sad a salamander is that he is not a axolotl any more. I hope you enjoyed this cause there is more coming.
     The second reason I like axolotls is that they can grow lost limbs. The can regrow every body part that they have. Scientist use axolotls for scientific facts to help people gain lost limbs. Once one of my teacher had everyone try to discover what makes axolotls grow lost limbs. I hope you like this and I hope you will like whats next.
     The final reason I like axolotls is they have bigger gills when the lakes have less oxygen. Scientist use axolotls to see how much oxygen there is in water. The smaller the gill the more the oxygen. Once I made a picture of a axolotl with giant gills. I hope you enjoyed this cause there is one last thing to show you.
     You can see axolotls are really unique they can turn to salamander, they can grow lost limb, and they have bigger gills when there is less oxygen in the water. Now you know the amazement of the great axolotls I hope you can enjoy them as much as me.

3/19/12

Have you ever seen a axolotl? If you have not it is one of the greatest animals of all time. The first thing I will discuss is how they can turn into a salamander. The second thing I will discuss is how they can grow lost limps. The final reason that I like the axolotl is how it has bigger gills when there is less oxygen in the water. If you are interested read on.
     The first reason I like the axolotl is they can turn to salamander. They just need to have salamander goo in the water or a chip infecting the water for it to turn to salamanders. When they turn to salamanders they will have to stay that way though. Once I heard a song saying how sad a salamander is that he is not a axolotl any more. I hope you enjoyed this cause there is more coming.
     The second reason I like axolotls is that they can grow lost limbs. The can regrow every body part that they have. Scientist use axolotls for scientific facts to help people gain lost limbs. Once one of my teacher had everyone try to discover what makes axolotls grow lost limbs. I hope you like this and I hope you will like whats next.
     The final reason I like axolotls is they have bigger gills when the lakes have less oxygen. Scientist use axolotls to see how much oxygen there is in water. The smaller the gill the more the oxygen. Once I made a picture of a axolotl with giant gills. I hope you enjoyed this cause there is one last thing to show you.
     I like axolotls for many reason but I used my best 3 I hope you enjoyed them.

Draft 2

     Once there was a kid named Jake. Jake was extremely strong, fast, and smart but one day when he came to a library Jake discovered a new type of strength. Jake looked at the books shelve when he came upon a book that seemed interesting it was called Planet Cronus!
     When he came to the check out the librarian said to never read the ending page! Jake thought she was just crazy and bought it and planed to read the ending page just for a big laugh. The time Jake ended the book he was read the final page and it said I can see you failed to believe what I said so feel my wrath. Right after that thunder struck the house and some he could not move.
     When he woke up Jake noticed that he was not a human he was a Gorilla person and he remembered a picture of the planet Cronus and he noticed he was on planet Cronus! He also saw a tiger person, a wolf person, and the most fierce of all a lion person. Jake thought they would attack him but he noticed they were as scared as he was but not the Lion. He told everyone how he got here and they said the same thing. They said the person who ruled this place was also the person that put them there. He noticed that they need to come back home so they thought they needed to think up a plan to stop the ruler and bring them back home. When he got a smart thought out plan he told everyone but the Lion said no.
     He said that he was the ruler once until he came along and kick him off of his own thrown. After that he left and we came to spring our plan into action. They all came to face the Ruler but it had the same voice of the librarian.
     It was the librarian he said I knew you would read it and I am here to teach you a lesson you will never forget. He ended up turning into Komodo Dragon. We all attack him but failed we were all passed out and he said ... Jake you have been a thorn in my plan long enough and now I will take care of you permanently.
     Right at that second the lion came out and attacked the Komodo Dragon and said there can only be one king and that is me! Right after that a portal opened up to lead them home. We were about to leave when he stopped them to ask if the Lion was coming? He said no Jake and he said that there needs to be a king here and I need to be it. The Tiger left. The Wolf left but Jake paused to say thank you thank you for every thing and goodbye forever.

Saving planet Cronus

Once there was a kid named Jake. Jake was extremely strong, fast, and smart but one day when he came to the library and he discovered a new type of strength. Jake looked at the books shelve when he came upon a book that seemed interesting it was called Planet Cronus! When he came to the check out the librarian said to never read the ending page! Jake thought she was just crazy and bought it and planed to read the ending page just for a big laugh. The time Jake ended the book he was read the final page and it said I can see you failed to believe what I said so feel my wrath. Right after that thunder struck the house and some he could move and when he woke up Jake noticed that he was not a human he was a Gorilla person and he remembered a picture of the planet Cronus and he noticed he was on planet Cronus! He also saw a tiger person, a wolf person, and the most fierce of all a lion person. Jake thought they would attack him but he noticed they were as scared as he was but not the Lion. He told everyone how he got here and they said the same thing. They said the person who ruled this place was also the person that put them there. He noticed that they need to come back home so they thought they needed to think up a plan to stop the ruler and bring them back home. When he got a smart thought out plan he told everyone but the Lion said no. He said that he was the ruler once until he came along and kick him off of his own thrown. After that he left and we came to spring our plan into action. They all came to face the Ruler but it had the same voice of the librarian. It was the librarian he said I knew you would read it and I am here to teach you a lesson you will never forget. He ended up turning into Komodo Dragon. We all attack him but failed we were all passed out and he said ... Jake you have been a thorn in my plan long enough and now I will take care of you permanently. Right at that second the lion came out and attacked the Komodo Dragon and said there can only be one king and that is me! Right after that a portal opened up to lead them home. We were about to leave when he stopped them to ask if the Lion was coming? He said no Jake and he said that there needs to be a king here and I need to be it. The Tiger left. The Wolf left but Jake paused to say thank you thank you for every thing and goodbye forever.

Draft 2

     Nice kick! Hi I guess your here to see what I like to do.  First I love to play soccer as you can see from the first sentence. The second thing I like to do is play on the computer. And the last thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. If you want to know more read on.
     The first thing I like to do as you know is soccer. I like play soccer is because I like to run around and score goals. Also I like how at the end of my practice my my team runs as fast as possible and see who is the fastest. Once a friend and I ran and it always and ended with a tie. So you can see that is why I like to play soccer and you can see more if you read on.
     Another hobby I like to do is play on the computer. My favorite computer game is poptropica. Here is how you play it. There are island in poptropica where their are thing that are people in danger and you have to save them. Once on one island you have to save the world from destruction. I hope you enjoyed that and you can learn more is you read on.
     The final thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. My favorite game to play is called Flip note studios. How to play Flip note studios is you make pictures of anything and you put some music on and you put it on the internet. Once I played Flip note studios and I made a ten minute song and put it on the internet. That is all the things I like to do or play but there is more so read on.
     Well you can see that this is the end I hope you enjoyed it while you could.