Draft 2

     Nice kick! Hi I guess your here to see what I like to do.  First I love to play soccer as you can see from the first sentence. The second thing I like to do is play on the computer. And the last thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. If you want to know more read on.
     The first thing I like to do as you know is soccer. I like play soccer is because I like to run around and score goals. Also I like how at the end of my practice my my team runs as fast as possible and see who is the fastest. Once a friend and I ran and it always and ended with a tie. So you can see that is why I like to play soccer and you can see more if you read on.
     Another hobby I like to do is play on the computer. My favorite computer game is poptropica. Here is how you play it. There are island in poptropica where their are thing that are people in danger and you have to save them. Once on one island you have to save the world from destruction. I hope you enjoyed that and you can learn more is you read on.
     The final thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. My favorite game to play is called Flip note studios. How to play Flip note studios is you make pictures of anything and you put some music on and you put it on the internet. Once I played Flip note studios and I made a ten minute song and put it on the internet. That is all the things I like to do or play but there is more so read on.
     Well you can see that this is the end I hope you enjoyed it while you could.

2/27/12

     Nice kick! Hi I guess your here to see what I like to do.  First I love to play soccer as you can see from the first sentence. The second thing I like to do is play on the computer. And the last thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. If you want to know more read on.
     The first thing I like to do as you know is soccer. I like play soccer is because I like to run around and score goals. Also I like how at the end of my practice my my team runs as fast as possible and see who is the fastest. Once a friend and I ran and it always and ended with a tie. So you can see that is why I like to play soccer and you can see more if you read on.
     The second thing I like to do is play on the computer. My favorite computer game is poptropica. Here is how you play it there are island in poptropica where their are thing that are people in danger and you have to save them. Once on one island you have to save the world from destruction. I hope you enjoyed that and you can learn more is you read on.
     The final thing I like to do is play Nintendo Ds. My favorite game to play is called Flip note studios.How to play Flip note studios is you make pictures of anything and you put some music on and you put it on the internet. Once I played Flip note studios and I made a ten minute song and put it on the internet. That is all the things I like to do or play but there is more so read on.
     Well you can see that this is the end I hope you enjoyed it while you could.

Poem of India

      I see greatness yes I do I see greatness how about you.  

     I see amazement in the air I see amazement that deserves some care. 

     The amazement is life and it is all around some is lost and some is found.

     India is my a my favorite place to be that is why I like it between you and me. 

     In India there are a million things to see including the Taj Mahal that is where I want to be. 

     In India that is a place where I want to roam and also it is a place I want to call home.

 

Sources:http://www.indiaplaces.com/img/taj-mahal-background-02.jpg    http://images02.olx.in/ui/10/15/70/1292239675_146251570_2-Visit-IndiaPlaces-in-India-to-Visit-Delhi-1292239675.jpg

Draft 2

     I love bridges I see that you might not like them now but just wait and you will love them. The first bridge is the Magdeburg Water Bridge. The second bridge is the Ponte Vecchio. The third and the greatest paragraph is about the Rolling Bridge. You see that you should read on.

     First let me tell you about the Magdeburg Water Bridge. The Magdeburg Water Bridge is the biggest bridge in Europe. The Magdeburg Water Bridge is one of the only bridges that is used for boats. One time I went to the bridge and got to see that the bridge is really filled with water. This is the reason why I love the Magdeburg Water Bridge I hope you read on to see the other bridges. 

     Let me also explain to you about the Ponte Vecchio bridge. It is  in Italy and the oldest of its kind. It was originally built of wood until destroyed and they learned that they should use stone. The first time I saw the bridge it looked like it was a restaurant. That is why I love the Ponte Vecchio bridge and I hope you learned to like it to.

     Last but not least is the Rolling Bridge also known as the bridge that curls up on itself. It is located in London where it looks amazing I may add. It is amazing because when a car gets on it it makes a circular form. I really wish that one day I can finally be there to see it myself. I really hope you enjoyed learning about this bridge.

     As you can see that these bridges each have different kinds of ways you use them and that is why I chose to do bridges.

Big Writing Bridges

I love bridges I see that you might not like them now but just wait and you will luv love them. The first bridge is the Magdeburg Water Bridge. The second bridge is the Ponte Vecchio. The third and the greatest paragraph is about the Rolling Bridge. You see that you should read on.

     The first paragraph as you know is about the Magdeburg Water Bridge. The Magdeburg Water Bridge is the biggest bridge in Europe. The Magdeburg Water Bridge is one of the only bridges that is used for boats. One time I went to the bridge and got to see that the bridge is really filled with water. This is the reason why I love the Magdeburg Water Bridge I hope you read on to see the other bridges. 

     The second paragraph is about the Ponte Vecchio bridge. It is  in Italy and the oldest of its kind. It was originally built of wood until destroyed and they learned that they should use stone. The first time I saw the bridge it looked like it was a restaurant. That is why I luv love the Ponte Vecchio bridge I hope you learned to like it to.

     Last but not least is the Rolling Bridge also known as the bridge that curls up on itself. It is located in London where it looks amazing I may add. While in its position the bridge is a normal inconspicuous steel and timber footbridge fully open it forms a circle.I really wish that one day I can finally be there to see it myself. I really hope you enjoyed this now theres is one more to go. 

     As you can see that these bridges each have different kinds of ways you use them and that is why I chose to do bridges.

Draft 2

     I love Florida! Oh hi I guess your here to see the reason why Florida is great well the first reason Florida is great is that there is gulf world zoo. The second reason Florida is great is that it has TESLA the school. The third reason Florida is great is that it has the greatest beach of all time. To learn more read on.
      The first reason Florida is great as you know is gulf world zoo. Gulf world is a zoo with Marian life and birds. I got to learn there are Australian penguins there. Once I got to see the Australian penguins out of their cage and even hold one. That is the first reason Florida is great.
      The second reason Florida is great is you guessed it TESLA the school. It is a computer school they only use computers.They always let you play games until the beginning of school. One day I got to play for 40 minutes straight because only one person was not here. That is another reason Florida is great.
      The Third reason Florida is great is of course the beach. The beach in Florida is one of the biggest beaches ever. Everyday you would want to be there. Once I stayed at the beach for 12 hours straight. That was the last reason Florida is great.

     You have reached the end I hoped you enjoyed it.

11/14/11

I love Florida! Oh hi I guess your here to see the reason why Florida is great well the first reason Florida is great is that there is gulf world zoo. The second reason Florida is great is that it has Tesla the school. The third reason Florida is great is that it has the greatest beach of all time. To learn more read on.

      The first reason Florida is great as you know is gulf world zoo. Gulf world is a zoo with Marian life and birds. I got to learn there are Australian penguins there. Once I got to see the Australian penguins out of their cage and even hold one. That is the first reason Florida is great.
      The second reason Florida is great is you guessed it Tesla the school. It is a computer school they only use computers.They always let you play games until the beginning of school. One day I got to play for 40 minutes strait because only one person was not here. That is another reason Florida is great.
      The Third reason Florida is great is of course the beach. The beach in Florida is one of the biggest beaches ever. Everyday you would want to be there. Once I stayed at the beach for 12 hours strait. That was the last reason Florida is great.
     You have reached the end I hoped you enjoyed it.